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[GEOWeasel #4: Jail]

Notable improvements and more!

Nice work. You've still got a little way to go, but the stride-hitting is imminent.

I didn't really laugh out loud at anything, but I found several parts to be legitimately funny. There wasn't much dead air at all.

The most noticeable problem at the moment is the backgrounds. They're very stiff and lifeless. I understand the limitations of a weekly cartoon, but I think you can probably do a bit better.

And you got Ed Atlin to do guest voices! Aww.

NikoAnesti responds:

Not much dead air? I thought there was too much, actually. i was even gonna add music, but I didn't want to increase the filesize.
As for backgrounds, they're actually better in episode 3, I was just spending too much time for some in this episode, so I had to down-tone it.